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What are some alternatives to fossil fuels? Do you feel the world ever stop using them?

What are some alternatives to fossil fuels? Do you feel the world ever stop using them? kYV3N
There is an unprecedented growth in the consumption of fossil fuels like coal, carburant and some others. These sources can be replaced with other environmentally friendly alternatives. Let us discuss in detail some alternatives to fossil fuels and if the World will ever prevent using the non-environmental products. To begin with, the whole world is dependent on fossil fuels. When these sources are burned to produce any product leads to threatening our environment in many ways. For example, changement in the sea levels, climate change and increasing pollution. If all this continue to happen, the whole world suffers. There will be no life on the planet one day. Thus, people have to realize and come up with new ideas to fulfil the quality need and for the future generation. Firstly, people should make Electronic cars which could be charged with battery instead of using the vehicles by using Petrol or diesel. Secondly, introducing solar power is another cheap and convenient source to provide electricity worldwide. Now, electric power is made up by wasting too much water. So, taking power from Solars would save the water. Last, but not least, using biodegradable methods such as farmers can grow their crops with the help of cow's dung instead of using fertilizers which could be very harmful for consumers. To conclude, there are immense alternatives to fossil fuels, which could use to save our planet from destruction. If people want to live a healthy life, then they should definitely stop the utilization of fossil fuels and choose other environmental friendly sources.
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fossil
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fuels
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carburant
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others. These
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us discuss in detail
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some
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fuels
and if the World will ever
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prevent
using the non-environmental products.

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with, the whole world is dependent on
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When
these
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sources
are burned
to produce any product leads to threatening our environment in
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many
ways.
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,
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changement
in the sea levels, climate
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change
and increasing pollution. If all
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this continue
to happen, the whole world suffers. There will be no life on the planet one day.
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,
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people
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realize and
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up with new
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ideas
to fulfil the quality need and for the future generation.

Firstly
,
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people
should
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make
Electronic cars which could
be charged
with battery
instead
of using the vehicles by using Petrol or diesel.
Secondly
, introducing solar power is another
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cheap
and convenient
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source
to provide electricity worldwide.
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, electric power
is made
up by wasting too much water.
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, taking power from
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would save the water. Last,
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not least, using biodegradable methods such as farmers can grow their crops with the
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help
of cow's dung
instead
of using fertilizers which could be
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very
harmful for consumers.

To conclude
, there are immense alternatives to
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fossil
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fuels
, which could
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use
to save our planet from destruction. If
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people
want to
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live
a healthy life, then they should definitely
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stop
the utilization of
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fossil
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fuels
and choose other environmental friendly
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sources
.
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IELTS essay What are some alternatives to fossil fuels? Do you feel the world ever stop using them?

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