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What do you think of children watching TV?

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I think if children watch educative, entertaining and creative TV programmes then they can learn from it. However, their parents should monitor what their children watch on TV and for how long. Watching TV is beneficial for children in some ways as it helps them relax and become inquisitive. On top of that, some TV programs provide useful academic knowledge to children. But, if children watch TV all day long, it can harm them both physically and psychologically. Such children lose their interests in outdoor activities and become addicted to TV and video games.
I
think
if
children
watch
educative, entertaining and creative TV
programmes
then they can learn from it.
However
, their parents should monitor what their
children
watch
on TV and for how long. Watching TV is beneficial for
children
in
some
ways as it
helps
them relax and become inquisitive.
On top of that
,
some
TV programs provide useful academic knowledge to
children
.
But
, if
children
watch
TV all day long, it can harm them both
physically
and
psychologically
. Such
children
lose their interests in outdoor activities and become addicted to TV and video games.
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IELTS essay What do you think of children watching TV?

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