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How should tourists behave when they are in a different country?

How should tourists behave when they are in a different country? D6y16

First of all, I think that tourists should do as much research about their destination as they can before their departure. This will help them learn more about the culture and what is considered polite as well as rude. It is important for tourists to uphold local customs and to consider laws with respect. They need to be mindful of religious and cultural beliefs. Being aware of what is illegal and socially unacceptable will be beneficial for tourists during their stay in another country. Overall, when on holiday, people need to behave appropriately and they need to know what can get them into trouble.

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