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How important is it for local governments to look after popular tourist attractions?

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Well, even though economies are dependent on tourism as a source of income, governments need to consider the negative impact it has on historic landmarks. For the most part, tourists visit the main attractions in a city to enjoy the scenery and to take photos, but at the same time there are people who will scratch and destroy the structures. One thing that local governments can do to prevent landmarks from vandalism is to hire security. Setting up new rules of visitation is another way to preserve the most popular tourist attractions. This means that entrance will be limited to a certain number of visitors per day. All these measures can help protect the attractions so that they will last far into the future.

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IELTS essay How important is it for local governments to look after popular tourist attractions?

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