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How has the size of the family changed in the last few decades in your country?

How has the size of the family changed in the last few decades in your country? 1apKG
Answer: From my experience, I can say that my grandfather had an extended family and people at that time used to live together with close relatives. As far as I have heard, their forefathers also live in a joint family and the number of family members was sometimes more than twenty. However, the trend of living in an extended family has changed remarkably in cities where most of the families are nuclear in nature. The villages in my country still have large families who live together but the number is shrinking day by day.
Answer: From my experience, I can say that my grandfather had an extended
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and the number of
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IELTS essay How has the size of the family changed in the last few decades in your country?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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