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How do you think the family will change in the future?

How do you think the family will change in the future? nRjyg
Answer: I believe more people will have a nuclear family and the size of the family will be small in the future. People do not like to have more than two children nowadays and who knows they will consider having one baby policy in the distant future. The very norm that a man gets married to a woman and have their own children to form a family is being challenged by the concept of same-sex marriage and this trend will increase in the future.
Answer: I believe more
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will have a nuclear family and the size of the family will be
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small
in the future.
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People
do not like to have more than two children nowadays and who knows they will consider having one baby policy in the distant future. The
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very
norm that a
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man
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gets
married to a woman and have their
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own
children to form a family is
being challenged
by the concept of same-sex marriage and this trend will increase in the future.
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IELTS essay How do you think the family will change in the future?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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