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What do you think do men and women communicate differentl

What do you think do men and women communicate differentl 3b9yd
Men and women are different, and it is a fact. Men and women can be equal in different place, for example: workplace, position or educational background. Despite these similarities, they can be very different in one area: the way in which they communicate. On the one hand, women's emotional expression is stronger than men's. Man can always speak about sport, but it is not interesting for womankind. They want to speak about love, man or about problems with their partners. Women are impressionable, they need kind from their dear ones, they want to hear sweet words. Generally, they always want to be paid attention. Mental strength of girls is more immense than boys. Females can provide required attention to more than one work at one time, which males can never do. On the other hand, also differ when it comes to what they say. Men tend to a “report”, meaning they use speech that contains facts, data and aims to solve problems. They prefer to speak about sport, cars, business, money, but not about feelings. Females can not hide their feelings, their tears and their words because they have more hormones than man. Male prefers to do something instead of just think about it, due to the fact they are undoubtedly better adapted genetically to perform physical activity. To sum up, it is important to note that over generalizing anything based on gender is a huge mistake. All people are individuals and each person will vary greatly from generalized standards. Also, their role always depends on the other factors, such us, society, religion, but not ability.
Men
and women are
different
, and it is a fact.
Men
and women can be equal in
different
place,
for example
: workplace, position or educational background. Despite these similarities, they can be
very
different
in one area: the way in which they communicate. On the one hand, women's emotional expression is stronger than
men
's.
Man
can always speak about sport,
but
it is not interesting for womankind. They want to speak about
love
,
man
or about problems with their partners. Women are impressionable, they need kind from their dear ones, they want to hear sweet words.
Generally
, they always want to
be paid
attention. Mental strength of girls is more immense than boys. Females can provide required attention to more than one work at one time, which males can never do.
On the other hand
,
also
differ when it
comes
to what they say.
Men
tend to a “report”, meaning they
use
speech that contains facts, data and aims to solve problems. They prefer to speak about sport, cars, business, money,
but
not about feelings. Females can not
hide
their feelings, their tears and their words
because
they have more hormones than
man
. Male prefers to do something
instead
of
just
think
about it, due to the fact they are
undoubtedly
better adapted
genetically
to perform physical activity. To sum up, it is
important
to note that over generalizing anything based on gender is a huge mistake. All
people
are individuals and each person will vary
greatly
from generalized standards.
Also
, their role always depends on the other factors, such us, society, religion,
but
not ability.
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IELTS essay What do you think do men and women communicate differentl

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