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Studying abroad is a best way to gain knowledge

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In the twenty first century whether enrolling in abroad university or studying in domestic ones is on-going debate amongst students. Many hold the view that it is beneficial for younger to go overseas so as to broaden their horizons From my perspective the merits of this trend prevail over the downsides for several reasons which I will analyse below On the one hand we can not ignore some drawbacks that studying overseas brings to juveniles First of all language barrier is the first hardship remind me Take Vietnamese students for example in case the young desire to go abroad they have no choice but to learn this native language well In fact this practice deprives students a number of time and long process Secondly perhaps this is the first time they have lived far from their significant others which enables them to the homesickness depression or even feeling of being abondoned Moreover pupils are easily contracted some diseases due to immediate climate change in unfamiliar areasOn the other hand contrary to these severe impacts thet studying abroad have I completely concur with the opinion that learners ought to go to other developed countries they will stand a chance of being exposed with new culture and great inventions in developed ones such as Japan the USA Singapore Consequently after graduating in university youngsters certainly get a well paid job and a conducive environment to ameliorate their ability compared to those who study at domestic college In addition living alone in strange country leads children to an independent life Because of the fact that when thay set off a wizard nation they start to embark on managing by themselves including paying pill water electricityIn conclusion despite these shortcomings it impacts on people in terms of language barrier and homesickness I also support students had better attend oversea course on account of salary and independent life
In the twenty
first
century whether enrolling in abroad university or studying in domestic
ones
is
on-going
debate amongst
students
.
Many
hold the view that it is beneficial for younger to go overseas
so as to
broaden their horizons From my perspective the merits of this trend prevail over the downsides for several reasons which I will
analyse
below On the one hand we can not
ignore
some
drawbacks that studying overseas brings to juveniles
First of all
language barrier is the
first
hardship remind me Take Vietnamese
students
for example
in case the young desire to go abroad they have no choice
but
to learn this native language well In fact this practice deprives
students
a number of time and long process
Secondly
perhaps this is the
first
time they have
lived
far from their significant others which enables them to the homesickness depression or even feeling of being
abondoned
Moreover
pupils are
easily
contracted
some
diseases due to immediate climate
change
in unfamiliar
areasOn
the other hand contrary to these severe impacts
thet
studying abroad have I completely concur with the opinion that learners ought to go to other
developed countries
they will stand a chance of
being exposed
with new culture and great inventions in developed
ones
such as Japan the USA Singapore
Consequently
after
graduating
in university youngsters
certainly
get
a well paid job and a conducive environment to ameliorate their ability compared to those who study at domestic college
In addition
living alone in strange country leads children to an independent life
Because of the fact that
when
thay
set off a wizard nation they
start
to embark on managing by themselves including paying pill water
electricityIn
conclusion despite these shortcomings it impacts on
people
in terms of language barrier and homesickness I
also
support
students
had better attend oversea course on account of salary and independent
life
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IELTS essay Studying abroad is a best way to gain knowledge

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