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effects of globalization on different levels

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Globalization led to the construction of a world who shares almost everything between each others. In these last decades, same products are almost in each and every country. In my point of view, this phenomenon has many benefits on the personal, social, economical levels. Globalization has many benefits on the personal level, first this will decrease the burden on people, since you can find anything you want without traveling, for example if a Mercedes car door was broken, you can simply buy new one from the same place you live in. Moreover, each country can reach a limited quality of a certain product, for example a medical kit, people will mostly buy that made in USA or GERMANY rather than that made in CHINA. on the same hand, it has a significant role in improving the social communication between countries. More agreements, and contracts will be done between countries, which in turn will improve the relations between them. Moreover, experts will be exchanges between countries, sharing knowledge, and experience which is considered a win-win contract. As improving personal, and social levels, for sure economy will be improved. Globalization will enhance the importing, and exporting thus trading will be enhanced, where both countries will be making more money, the importing country by selling it's product, where as the exporting one, by applying some taxes on these products. Globalization has a vital role in the development, and growth of countries. Despite any disadvantage, it offers many benefits on several levels.

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others
. In these last decades, same products are almost in each and every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
. In my point of view, this phenomenon has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 benefits on the personal, social, economical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheight
levels
. Globalization has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 benefits on the personal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatched
level
, first
 this will decrease the burden on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, since you can find anything you want without traveling, for example
 if a Mercedes car door was broken
, you can simply
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 new one from the same place you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in. Moreover
, each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
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 a medical kit, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will mostly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 that made A determiner is probably missing here: "in the USA".in the USA
in USA
 or GERMANY rather
 than that made in CHINA.

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on
 the same hand, it has a significant role in improving the social communication between You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
. More agreements, and contracts will be done
 between You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, which in turn will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the relations between them. Moreover
, experts will be exchanges between You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, sharing knowledge, and experience which is considered
 a win-win contract.

As improving personal, and social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheight
levels
, for sure economy will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
. Globalization will enhance the importing, and exporting thus
 trading will be enhanced
, where both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 will be making more money, the importing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 by selling Did you mean "its" (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?its
it's
 product, Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 the exporting one, by applying This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 taxes on these products.

Globalization has a vital role in the development, and growth of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
. Despite any disadvantage, it offers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 benefits on several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheight
levels
. 