Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of repeat driving tests? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of repeat driving tests? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? MMGY9
The growing number of cars and reckless driving are the major causes of increasing road accidents these days. Therefore, many people, as well as some politicians, express their view that repetitive driving tests, and not just one test to get the licence, should be in place. This essay outlines some advantages as well as disadvantages of the continuous testing process and opines that this has more benefits. To start with the demerits, multiple tests may unnecessarily impose a burden on people. This is because they will have to prepare for the test, pay for it, and allocate time for the test in order to renew the licence. As a result, many people may tend to avoid the tests, and one day, get pulled over and fined for an outdated licence. Moreover, it will cost money to the authority as well. Therefore, it may not solve the issue easily while both the drivers and the authority will be under pressure. To outline the advantages, road safety in a country is a major concern and so is the obligation of legislators regarding this. Increasing vehicular movements and driver's recklessness is primarily responsible for accidents on the roads. Drivers get outdated and more inept to new road rules and safety practices. For example, with age, many drivers may not see the traffic signals and road signs easily. As a result, such drivers may potentially hit other moving vehicles and people. Therefore, the repeat tests for driving, from time to time, will definitely improve the safety on roads. Moreover, many young drivers do not abide by the traffic rules, and continuous tests would ensure their awareness of safe driving. Finally, when people will have to take driving tests periodically, they will remain updated about traffic and safety rules. In conclusion, reoccurring driving tests improve people's driving accuracy, make them aware of safety and laws, and find out potentially risky drivers. So the benefits of such tests surpass the drawbacks.
The growing number of cars and reckless
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driving
are the major causes of increasing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
accidents these days.
Therefore
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
,
as well
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
politicians, express their view that repetitive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
, and not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
test
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the
Possible spelling mistake. 'licence' is British English.
licence
, should be in place. This essay outlines
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
advantages
as well
as disadvantages of the continuous testing process and opines that this has more benefits.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
with the demerits, multiple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
may
unnecessarily
impose a burden on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
prepare for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
test
, pay for it, and allocate time for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
test
in order to renew the
Possible spelling mistake. 'licence' is British English.
licence
.
As a result
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
may tend to avoid the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
, and one day,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
pulled over and fined for an outdated
Possible spelling mistake. 'licence' is British English.
licence
.
Moreover
, it will cost money to the authority
as well
.
Therefore
, it may not solve the issue
easily
while both the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
and the authority will be under pressure.

To outline the advantages,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
safety
in a country is a major concern and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
is the obligation of legislators regarding this. Increasing vehicular movements and driver's recklessness is
primarily
responsible for accidents on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Drivers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
outdated and more inept to new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
safety
practices.
For example
, with age,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
may not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the traffic signals and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
signs
easily
.
As a result
, such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
may
potentially
hit other moving vehicles and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
Therefore
, the repeat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driving
, from time to time, will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
safety
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
.
Moreover
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
young
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
do not abide by the traffic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
, and continuous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
would ensure their awareness of safe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driving
.
Finally
, when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
periodically
, they will remain updated about traffic and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
safety
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
.

In conclusion
, reoccurring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driving
accuracy,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them aware of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
safety
and laws, and find out
potentially
risky
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
the benefits of such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
surpass the drawbacks.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of repeat driving tests? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
325 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts