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The nuclear family is well adapted to move geographyically due to its size do you think childrean benifit in any way from

The nuclear family is well adapted to move geographyically due to its size do you think childrean benifit in any way from GMqMB
Harshpreet Singh, [02. 05. 21 11: 59] Now a days, people who belong to a small families can easily migrate to any other part of the nation due to having less member in family. They move without any problem. I will discuss the benefit for peoples in education on the other side it and it are less than the merits which will discuss in further paragraphs. To embark on, There are the numerous benefits for the people when they are shifting to another place. They can get more facility for the better career pupils learn more about other activities that schools provide more better education regarding their interest currently days people relocating in a foreign Nations like Australia and the USA for their offsprings like free education system in which they can also learn about nation and meet with strangers which aid them to improve their skillsprobing further, there are numberable advantages of this Notion rather than disadvantages they can learn different languages which have numerous benefits in the future people. while, change place from rural area to urban areas they provide work opportunity and for their children again to gain better knowledge ruler area have new technology based education system children also can take part in the other activity and join classes which they have interest for example urban area have we have better facility for the people like smart schools parents of children are well educated and city are also well maintained Harshpreet Singh, [02. 05. 21 12: 17] to conclude, I believe that my increasing is a better for the children as they can make a new friend and well maintained school they also can take part in other activity
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Harshpreet
Singh, [02. 05. 21 11: 59]

Did you mean "nowadays"?
Now a days
,
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people
who belong to a
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small
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "family"?
families
can
easily
migrate to any
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other
part of the nation due to having less member in family. They
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move
without any problem. I will discuss the benefit for
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peoples
in
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education
on the
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other
side it and it
Did you mean "is"?
are
less than the merits which will discuss in
further
paragraphs. To embark on, There are the numerous benefits for the
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people
when they are shifting to another place. They can
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get
more facility for the
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better
career pupils learn more about
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other
activities that schools provide more
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better
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education
regarding their interest
currently
days
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people
relocating in a foreign Nations like Australia and the USA for their
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offsprings
like free
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education
system in which they can
also
learn about nation and
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meet
with strangers which aid them to
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improve
their
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skillsprobing
further
, there are
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numberable
advantages of this Notion
rather
than disadvantages they can learn
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different
languages which have numerous benefits in the future
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people
.
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while
,
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change
place from rural
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area
to urban
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areas
they provide work opportunity and for their
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children
again to gain
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better
knowledge ruler
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area
have new technology based
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education
system
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children
also
can
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take part
in the
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other
activity and
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join
classes which they have interest
for example
urban
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area
have we have
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better
facility for the
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people
like smart schools parents of
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children
are
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well educated
and city are
also
well maintained

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Harshpreet
Singh, [02. 05. 21 12: 17]

to conclude
, I believe that my increasing is a
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better
for the
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children
as they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a new friend and well maintained school they
also
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
activity
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IELTS essay The nuclear family is well adapted to move geographyically due to its size do you think childrean benifit in any way from

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  American English
2 paragraphs
282 words
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