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What do you like the most about your hometown?

What do you like the most about your hometown? k5D0R
When all individuals mention or have any question about some things which I am particularly fond of my homeland. At that time, in my mind, I had numerous things which I liked. Choosing the most interesting thing is really hard for me, therefore, I will try my best. Firstly, I have to say that I am passionate about people who live here and have rusticity due to always truthful sharing and enthusiastic helping to each other when they are in trouble, for example, during the days approaching the Lunar New Year in my hometown, there are often donations to create gifts to help disadvantaged households which makes us to more connect. Secondly, having good air quality. This is because there are large primary forests and the number of transport is still small. I believe that clean air will make for people to be energetic as well as relaxed in order to start or finish their hard day. To be more clear, I think you can watch some videos which describe life in rural areas with fresh air. And from my perspective, I guess that after watching videos, you will want to live somewhere like that. If you have a chance to come here, I will introduce more mystery and unique things. Now, I am ready to become a tour guide in order to help you to discover this amazing land.
When all individuals mention or have any question about
some
things which I am
particularly
fond of my homeland. At that time, in my mind, I had numerous things which I liked. Choosing the most interesting thing is
really
hard
for me,
therefore
, I will try my best.

Firstly
, I
have to
say that I am passionate about
people
who
live
here and have rusticity due to always truthful sharing and enthusiastic helping to each other when they are in trouble,
for example
, during the days approaching the Lunar New Year in my hometown, there are
often
donations to create gifts to
help
disadvantaged households which
makes
us to more connect.

Secondly
, having
good
air quality. This is
because
there are large primary forests and the number of transport is
still
small
. I believe that clean air will
make
for
people
to be energetic
as well
as relaxed in order to
start
or finish their
hard
day. To be more
clear
, I
think
you can
watch
some
videos which
describe
life in rural areas with fresh air. And from my perspective, I guess that after watching videos, you will want to
live
somewhere like that.

If you have a chance to
come
here, I will introduce more mystery and unique things.
Now
, I am ready to become a tour guide in order to
help
you to discover this amazing land.
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IELTS essay What do you like the most about your hometown?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
230 words
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