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what do you do during the week?

what do you do during the week? m2J11

during the week, I usually wake up at 5: 20. I sometimes lie in bed for 5-10 minutes, but then I have to get up ready for work. I leave home at about 5: 40 and get to park by 6. I go for a walk with my friend every morning and then I came back and have breakfast. In the summer, I take shower after walking, but in the winter I often take a bath instead. I do the shopping on Saturday. Fortunately, I work at home and during my break, I do most of the housework. I have a lunch break from 1-2 pm, and usually a couple of short breaks during the day. So I have one or two snacks during the day. I have to make my own breakfast, lunch, and dinner, but I don't bother to cook very much during the week. I have dinner at about 8 pm. Most evenings, I go to bed around 11: 30 pm and usually fall asleep very quickly. If I have a late night, it's easy to oversleep the next morning, then I may be late for my date in the park. If I can, I take a nap in the afternoon. On the weekends, I often have a lie-in. In the week I usually stay in and work as a freelancer. one the weekend, I go out, but I also have friends for dinner, or friends come round to play cards.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDuring
during
 the week, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlycustomarilyroutinelymostlysometimesgenerally
usually
 wake up at 5: 20. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 lie in bed for 5-10 minutes, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 then I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 up ready for work. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 home at about 5: 40 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to park by 6.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 go for a walk with my friend every morning and then I came back and have breakfast.

In the summer, I take shower after walking, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the winter I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 take a bath instead
.

I do the shopping on Saturday. Fortunately
, I work at home and during my break, I do most of the housework.

I have a lunch break from 1-2 pm, and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlycustomarilyroutinelymostlysometimesgenerally
usually
 a couple of short breaks during the day. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I have one or two snacks during the day. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 breakfast, lunch, and dinner, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I don't bother to cook This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much during the week.

I have dinner at about 8 pm.

Most evenings, I go to bed around 11: 30 pm and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlycustomarilyroutinelymostlysometimesgenerally
usually
 fall asleep This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
quickly
. If I have a late night, it's easy to oversleep the next
 morning, then I may be late for my date in the park. If I can, I take a nap in the afternoon. On the weekends, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 have a lie-in.

In the week I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlycustomarilyroutinelymostlysometimesgenerally
usually
 stay in and work as a freelancer. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOne
one
 the weekend, I go out, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I also
 have friends for dinner, or friends This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 round to play cards. 