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what changes in your city?

what changes in your city? YRL2B
There are some changes when I go back to my city. My city is changing quite rapidly and dramatically, it’s becoming more developed residentially and commercially now. There is a lot of construction such as buildings and commercial centers with lots of shops and stores. Looking back ten years ago, my city there was a noticeable difference from now. From a city with many trees and very few of buildings.
There are
some
changes
when I go back to my city. My city is changing quite
rapidly
and
dramatically
, it’s becoming more developed
residentially
and
commercially
now
. There is
a lot of
construction such as buildings and commercial centers with lots of shops and stores. Looking back ten years ago, my city there was a noticeable difference from
now
. From a city with
many
trees and
very
few of buildings.
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IELTS essay what changes in your city?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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