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What benefits do you think tourism brings to society?

What benefits do you think tourism brings to society? W81pq
Tourism has always been a good opportunity to get familiar with other nations culture. Going to another country can be beneficial for that country as nearly all tourisms bring money to that country and natives get the chance to know other cultures all over the world. Nowadays, countries that have many tourism places are more developed than the others because they have to meet their tourists needs and match their area with tourism needs. Moreover, the money that tourists bring to buy handicrafts can improve the economic of that country.
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familiar with other nations culture. Going to another
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can be beneficial for that
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tourisms
bring money to that
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and natives
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the chance to know other cultures all over the world. Nowadays,
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countries
that have
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many
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tourism
places are more developed than the others
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they
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have to
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their tourists needs and match their area with
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needs.
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, the money that tourists bring to
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buy
handicrafts can
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IELTS essay What benefits do you think tourism brings to society?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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