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What benefits do you think tourism brings to society?

What benefits do you think tourism brings to society? W81pq
Tourism has always been a good opportunity to get familiar with other nations culture. Going to another country can be beneficial for that country as nearly all tourisms bring money to that country and natives get the chance to know other cultures all over the world. Nowadays, countries that have many tourism places are more developed than the others because they have to meet their tourists needs and match their area with tourism needs. Moreover, the money that tourists bring to buy handicrafts can improve the economic of that country.
Tourism
has always been a
good
opportunity to
get
familiar with other nations culture. Going to another
country
can be beneficial for that
country
as
nearly
all
tourisms
bring money to that
country
and natives
get
the chance to know other cultures all over the world. Nowadays,
countries
that have
many
tourism
places are more developed than the others
because
they
have to
meet
their tourists needs and match their area with
tourism
needs.
Moreover
, the money that tourists bring to
buy
handicrafts can
improve
the economic of that
country
.
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IELTS essay What benefits do you think tourism brings to society?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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