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What are your opinions, experiences, and expectations about studying English?

What are your opinions, experiences, and expectations about studying English? 6N6qK
From my perspective, as English is my second language. Since I've used it almost forever, it surprised me a lot about how the world goes on these days. I have lots of friends on the internet from various countries. We've shared our experiences and some cultures. Once, I thought that I'm so blessed I met them. At first, I didn't good at English like this, but they told me what I did wrong. That's made me change my mindset and pay attention to study English. Now, when several pals are applying to university, I expected to use
From my perspective, as English is my second language. Since I've
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it almost forever, it surprised me a lot about how the world goes on these days. I have lots of friends on the internet from various countries. We've shared our experiences and
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cultures.
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blessed I met them. At
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, I didn't
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at English like this,
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they
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me what I did
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. That's made me
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change
my mindset and pay attention to study English.
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Now
, when several pals are applying to university, I
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IELTS essay What are your opinions, experiences, and expectations about studying English?

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