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What are you like?explain it.

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I'm not a shy person, but I do not like crowds. I like happy people very much because I get a lot of positive energy from them. I can’t trust anyone easily and it takes time to be friends with someone, but if I’m friends with someone, I try to be friends with them for a lifetime. I love those who are in my life very much. I try to adjust my self in the group of people. I try to choose the right way of life and I attempted for the things that I wanted.

I'm not a shy person, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I do not like

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCrowds
crowds
. I like happy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphmuch.much!much?much:much,much;
much


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBecause
because
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 energy from them. I can’t trust anyone easily
 and it takes time to be friends with someone, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if I’m friends with someone, I try to be friends with them for a lifetime. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 those who are in my life This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 try to adjust my self in the group of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 try to choose the right way of life and I attempted for the things that I wanted. 