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nowadays majority of the society like to read news on internet what will the future of the newspaper . to what extent do you agree

nowadays majority of the society like to read news on internet what will the future of the newspaper. to what extent do you agree e3gBW
in this modernized word the majority of the society likes to read the news on internet, but the role of conventional newspaper is also important for every individual. i agree that the news reading become easy due to advancement of the technology but, I disagree the newspaper will remain much important because it is an old method to getting knowledge about our surroundings. To start with nowadays the technology at theit booming stages. so approach towards news become very effort less. Due to invention of mobile phones the way og communicating news or any other information of country and society are entirely transformed.
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IELTS essay nowadays majority of the society like to read news on internet what will the future of the newspaper. to what extent do you agree

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  American English
2 paragraphs
103 words
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