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What are you doing all day??

What are you doing all day?? VlLeO
Well today we were wake up late in the morning because ankush arjun and manraj is came at my home yesterday night so thats why and after that we ate our breakfast and then we were going to haveli fir some work and then after some time they were go to our homes amd after that my maternal uncle was caame in afternoon for pick the manraj amd aftrr that me with my parent slept and after in evening we take tea with spme snaks and after gone to farm and then after came back and some time before we took our dinner
Well
today
we were
wake
up late in the morning
because
ankush
arjun
and
manraj
is
came
at my home
yesterday night
so
thats
why and after that we ate our
breakfast and
then we were going to
haveli
fir
some
work and then after
some
time they were
go
to our homes
amd
after that my maternal uncle was
caame
in afternoon for pick the
manraj
amd
aftrr
that me with my parent slept and after in evening we take tea with
spme
snaks
and after gone to farm and then after came back and
some
time
before
we took our dinner
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IELTS essay What are you doing all day??

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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