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WHAT ARE THE PROBLEMS WITH PUBLIC TRANSPORT?

WHAT ARE THE PROBLEMS WITH PUBLIC TRANSPORT? k5W98
Thirdly, buses lack flexibility when it comes to schedule. Commonly, buses run on a fixed timetable. As a result, people traveling outside of business hours cannot benefit from them. Take my own case as an example; I traveled to Bangkok last year and took a bus to visit the night market closed at 3 AM. However, the first bus did not begin to run until 5 AM. I, therefore, did not have the chance to get to the market. Traveling by public transport is fairly inconvenient and lacks self-control.
Thirdly
, buses lack flexibility when it
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comes
to schedule.
Commonly
, buses run on a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
timetable.
As a result
,
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people
traveling
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outside of
business hours cannot benefit from them. Take my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
case as an example; I traveled to Bangkok last year and took a bus to visit the night market closed at 3 AM.
However
, the
first
bus did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
to run until 5 AM. I,
therefore
, did not have the chance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to the market. Traveling by public transport is
fairly
inconvenient and lacks self-control.
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IELTS essay WHAT ARE THE PROBLEMS WITH PUBLIC TRANSPORT?

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