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talk about a family member u love most

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I am going to talk about my mom - the person who I love the most. Her name is Thanh Huong. Although she will be forty this year, her appearance does not look old as her face is small and not a lot of grey hair can be seen. She has a habit of going to church and meditating, that’s why she has a calm personality. I’m a highschool-student, I have a lot of homework and projects. My mom is busy at work and it leads to a lack of time spent together. On the weekend, we often go shopping together to buy groceries for next week. Once in a while, me and my mom go outside for some coffee, that is the time I love the most after a week. As the only child in the house, I always try my best not to let her be disappointed and try to take care of her when she’s sick. I'm a bit shy but I can say that without her, my life would have been a huge mess.
I am going to talk about my mom
-
the person who I
love
the most. Her name is Thanh
Huong
. Although she will be forty this year, her appearance does not look
old
as her face is
small
and not
a lot of
grey
hair can be
seen
. She has a habit of going to church and meditating, that’s why she has a calm personality.

I’m a
highschool-student
, I have
a lot of
homework and projects. My mom is busy at work and it leads to a lack of time spent together. On the weekend, we
often
go shopping together to
buy
groceries for
next
week. Once in a while, me and my mom go outside for
some
coffee,
that is
the time I
love
the most after a week.

As the
only
child in the
house
, I always try my best not to
let
her
be disappointed
and try to take care of her when she’s sick. I'm a bit shy
but
I can say that without her, my life would have been a huge mess.
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IELTS essay talk about a family member u love most

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
178 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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