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talk about a family member u love most

talk about a family member u love most 6da50

I am going to talk about my mom - the person who I love the most. Her name is Thanh Huong. Although she will be forty this year, her appearance does not look old as her face is small and not a lot of grey hair can be seen. She has a habit of going to church and meditating, that’s why she has a calm personality. I’m a highschool-student, I have a lot of homework and projects. My mom is busy at work and it leads to a lack of time spent together. On the weekend, we often go shopping together to buy groceries for next week. Once in a while, me and my mom go outside for some coffee, that is the time I love the most after a week. As the only child in the house, I always try my best not to let her be disappointed and try to take care of her when she’s sick. I'm a bit shy but I can say that without her, my life would have been a huge mess.

I am going to talk about my mom Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 the person who I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the most. Her name is Thanh Possible spelling mistake found.HungHuangHmongHong
Huong
. Although she will be forty this year, her appearance does not look This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 as her face is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 and not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
Possible spelling mistake. 'grey' is British English.gray
grey
 hair can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
. She has a habit of going to church and meditating, that’s why she has a calm personality.

I’m a Possible spelling mistake found.
highschool-student
, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 homework and projects. My mom is busy at work and it leads to a lack of time spent together. On the weekend, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 go shopping together to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 groceries for next
 week. Once in a while, me and my mom go outside for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 coffee, that is
 the time I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the most after a week.

As the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 child in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, I always try my best not to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 her be disappointed
 and try to take care of her when she’s sick. I'm a bit shy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I can say that without her, my life would have been a huge mess. 