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What are the negative effects of modern technology on our life?

What are the negative effects of modern technology on our life? 75erb

Technology has revolutionized the world over the past 20 years but that revolution did not come without a price. While there are some great benefits to living in a tech-filled world, we also should consider some of the negative ways technology has changed our lives. The attachment to our devices can also leave us feeling isolated. A significant lack of human contact can even cause depression. When the majority of our interactions with others take place online, we may even feel disconnected from humanity. For example, the impersonal feel of texting often leads to miscommunication. As communication via text continues rising, this results in a greater distance between us and even those closest to us.

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 leads to miscommunication. As communication via text continues rising, this results in a greater distance between us and even those closest to us. 

IELTS essay What are the negative effects of modern technology on our life?

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American English

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