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Public college should be tuition free.

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Majority of colleges nowadays are very expensive. As a consequence a lot of students can't afford it and therefore are not available to get their education. So I think that tuitions should be free for everyone for several reasons. Firstly, as I've said public colleges are far from free. The poor can't educate because of it. Everyone must have the opportunity to learn. Although there are scholarships and similar things, it is still unfair to a significant number. An equality is needed. Our wealth and money don't represent us as people. Our minds and soul are the essential thing. If there are this boundaries that limit some then there it wouldn't be fair. Someone really smart with great potential won't be able to expand its potential and develop something unique, just because of lack of money. Secondly, I think as a society we are gaining negative effects this way. By not allowing everyone to learn we are decreasing our chances of going forward. Throughout the history there were many great people that had amazing ideas but just weren't able to develop them because they were poor. This way we are losing potential geniuses and great people. We are limiting our own progress. Furthermore, some of the students that pay their tuitions aren't as a smart and capable as some that don't. World will have a smarter unit if colleges are free. All in all, colleges should be free and their tuitions should be available for all. This will have only positive effects in the future. Both individuals and society will benefit from it.

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