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Success at work these days requires a wide range of skills, of which presentational ability is certainly among the most important. However, there are two other skills appear to be more usefull, which we will evaluate now.

Success at work these days requires a wide range of skills, of which presentational ability is certainly among the most important. However, there are two other skills appear to be more usefull, which we will evaluate now. gGabD
Success at work these days requires a wide range of skills, of which presentational ability is certainly among the most important. However, there are two other skills appear to be more usefull, which we will evaluate now. Possibly the key skill in professional life today is in fact the ability to handlу a high workload, including the methods of prioritising tasks and managing one's time in effective way. In most professions, this skill grown in importance hugely over recent years, while the need to publik speaking has probably remained static. For example, in the medical field, doctors attend increasingly fewer conferences and seminars, because these events are perceived as time-consuming and less productive than they used to be due to the ease of exchanging information remotely. The second most important skill is probably the capacity to manage team of people, including the techniques of setting and monitoring team objectives. This ability is fundamental to modern organisations in both business and the public sector, and success in these area virtually garanties a person professional advancement, even if their public speaking skills are less developed. We see this in the way in which finance and consumer goods companies promote effective team managers, but rarely require them to adress large group of people. The same trend can be seen in the civil administration and public services, there public speaking has to some extend been replaced by use of social media. For these reason, I would evaluate presentation skills as a tertiary skill, which is important but increasingly less useful that in the past, due to the radical changes in the way we wark together and communicate each other personally. Overall, it is true that people should not neglect or underestimate the usefulness of speaking skills. However, the skills of workload management and team direction appear to be more relevant and decisive in today's rapidly exolving workplace.
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appear to be more
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usefull
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skill
in professional life
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today
is in fact the ability to
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handlу
a high workload, including the methods of
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prioritising
tasks and managing one's time in effective way. In most professions, this
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skill
grown in importance
hugely
over recent years, while the need to
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publik
speaking has
probably
remained static.
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, in the medical field, doctors attend
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fewer conferences and seminars,
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these
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used
to be due to the
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ease
of exchanging information
remotely
.

The second most
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is
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the capacity to manage
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team
of
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people
, including the techniques of setting and monitoring
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team
objectives. This ability is fundamental to modern
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organisations
in both business and the
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public
sector, and success in
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these area
virtually
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garanties
a person professional advancement, even if their
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public
speaking
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skills
are less developed. We
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see
this in the way in which finance and consumer
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goods
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companies
promote effective
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team
managers,
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but
rarely require them to
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adress
large group of
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people
. The same trend can be
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seen
in the civil administration and
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public
services, there
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public
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has to
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some
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use
of social media.

For these reason, I would evaluate presentation
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skills
as a tertiary
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skill
, which is
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important
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but
increasingly
less useful that in the past, due to the radical
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changes
in the way we
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together and communicate each other
personally
.

Overall
, it is true that
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people
should not neglect or underestimate the usefulness of speaking
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skills
.
However
, the
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skills
of workload management and
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team
direction appear to be more relevant and decisive in
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today
's
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exolving
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IELTS essay Success at work these days requires a wide range of skills, of which presentational ability is certainly among the most important. However, there are two other skills appear to be more usefull, which we will evaluate now.

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313 words
6.0
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