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What are the mian problems of studing abroad

What are the mian problems of studing abroad 2JNJ
While there are a number of merits that encourage students to study abroad, some difficulties might occur through this journey. I personally have a sense of dependence to my family and always strive to keep the family close to each other. So, missing them for a long period of time could be bitterly annoying to me. I am certain that the absence of my family could disrupt me directly. As well as this, a subsequent factor that might be posed a difficulty is the language misunderstanding that highly affects our communication. Thus, if you cant learn the new language, you cant interact in a proper way. Another issue that merits a mention is that when we enter a new palce that most people lead different beliefs, regulations, and ideas, we must immerse ourselves in the new culture to prevent culture shock. Actually, culture shock is a sense of feeling discomfort, homesickness that creates as soon as everybody enters a new place. These challenges gradually create depression, disorientation, and extreme sadness and finally reduce our energy.
While there are a number of merits that encourage students to study abroad,
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difficulties might occur through this journey. I
personally
have a sense of dependence to my family and always strive to
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keep
the family close to each other.
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, missing them for a long period of time could be
bitterly
annoying to me. I am certain that the absence of my family could disrupt me
directly
.

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as this, a subsequent factor that might
be posed
a difficulty is the language misunderstanding that
highly
affects our communication.
Thus
, if you
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learn the
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language, you
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cant
interact
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Another issue that merits a mention is that when we enter a
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palce
that most
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lead
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different
beliefs, regulations, and
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ideas
, we
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must
immerse ourselves in the
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new
culture to
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prevent
culture shock. Actually, culture shock is a sense of feeling discomfort, homesickness that creates as
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soon
as everybody enters a
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new
place. These challenges
gradually
create depression, disorientation, and extreme sadness and
finally
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reduce
our energy.

IELTS essay What are the mian problems of studing abroad

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