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What are the issues of primary education in Viet Nam ?

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With the increasing development of the country, the education sector in general and primary education in particular are receiving (DRAW/ ATTRACT) more and more attention from people. In particular, primary education is the first stage and plays an important foundation for ->IN children's education. However, in recent years, primary education in Vietnam has faced many > A LOT OF problems. So let's explore and analyze those issues together. Primary education in Vietnam has many problems. But in my opinion, the following problems are the most prominent. The first issue is the lack of a legal corridor for primary education. Recently, the Department of Primary Education has issued many documents, including many circulars providing direct professional guidance for primary education. This is a very prominent time in terms of legal work, legal corridor for fundamental and comprehensive renovation of education and especially primary education when preparing to implement the new general education program. Although the Ministry of Education has issued a circular on the selection of textbooks and many different sets of textbooks for teaching and there have been many guiding documents, this is the first time of implementation, so there are still many problems. , many things are not suitable. In addition, there are many other problems such as revenue abuse, teachers' salaries and benefits, student evaluation issues, etc. Therefore, the Ministry of Education needs to build and complete the legal framework in written documents. Specific guidance documents and circulars to improve the feasibility and effectiveness of the implementation of the new general education program, especially in primary education, Problem 2: Textbook programs and teaching innovation, testing and assessment. The curriculum of textbooks and innovation in teaching, testing and evaluation has been implemented for a short time, but there have been many positive signals along with inadequacies and difficulties. About the textbook program: There have been many sets of textbooks that have been compiled, evaluated, approved and issued. The school will have many choices to choose which book series to serve in teaching. The new textbooks have been streamlined, streamlined, but not mechanically cut, but arranged in the direction of integration and scientific differentiation so that the knowledge circuits are practical, neat and close to life. practical and age-appropriate living, besides avoiding the obsolescence of the content. However, due to the newly released book, it causes a bit of difficulty in acquiring knowledge from students. Besides, the outbreak of covid 19 led to students often having to study online at home. This makes it even more difficult, especially when parents are involved in homeschooling. About teaching methods: Renovation of the general education program emphasizes innovation in teaching organization methods, especially innovation in teaching and assessment methods. Primary school teachers have the strength of being strict and standard in teaching, but this is the barrier. Many teachers who have not dared to change still follow the old ways and teaching methods. Primary school teachers need to learn and innovate methods to enhance the teacher's initiative and creativity in teaching and to assess the quality of competence and progress of students. Problem 3: Raising the standard of teachers to be effective and practical: Recently, primary school teachers have improved a lot. A lot of contract teachers have been put on the payroll, which increases the number of primary teachers to fill in places where there is a shortage of primary school teachers. The teachers have been very enthusiastic in learning about the new curriculum and textbooks to implement the new general education program. However, there are still some problems such as: recruiting teachers in the locality needs to be objective and fair to create conditions for teachers to continue to devote to the cause of education. Currently, our country has more than 400, 000 primary school teachers, but the number of teachers who have not met the training standards according to the Education Law is still a lot. These teachers will be trained to raise standards in both qualifications and expertise, but how to organize the implementation to still ensure the interests of teachers when going to school. And this needs to be directed by relevant departments so that teachers can rest assured that they can contribute to the educational cause of the country. On the other hand, the Ministry of Education needs to have a reasonable roadmap for raising standards, so it should not rush into one stage, but it should also not be indifferent to avoid the situation that the required quality is not guaranteed. Problem 4: School problems and teaching equipment. This is one of the big problems for primary education, especially in big cities and in disadvantaged areas. The situation of overcrowded classes is especially in some densely populated places, industrial zones, etc. , so many schools are under great pressure in terms of classrooms and equipment. Therefore, local departments need to pay great attention to investment to create the conditions for the education sector to perform well in its professional tasks. In addition, in some places with few students, the management agency has accumulated difficulties for both students and teachers. For teaching equipment, schools need to buy enough according to the schedule so that there is no shortage of equipment. And at the same time, the provision of teaching equipment and equipment must go hand in hand with textbooks, so that the situation of having books before the equipment will not achieve the effectiveness of teaching and learning. Problem 5: Renovating school governance. With the spirit of innovation in all stages of the teaching process, the management of the school and the principal must also innovate to match the new general education program. Through reports and practice, many principals have innovated very quickly and have been creative, but many primary school principals still manage the school in the traditional way. When the school principal manages in a traditional way, it will be difficult for the teacher to be creative. The reporting of books, too many meetings, and the old way of managing teachers and classes causes teachers to be distracted from professional work, struggling to meet, which makes it difficult to be creative in the way they work. teaching and learning by teachers. Therefore, the school principal needs to innovate thinking, change and be creative in school management to arouse the creativity of teachers. Above are the outstanding issues of Vietnamese education in recent years. There are problems that are positive and there are problems that need to be addressed. Positive issues need to be encouraged and promoted, and problems that need to be solved need to be joined together by departments, localities, people and primary school teachers themselves to limit the resolution of problems. above. When the problems are limited and resolved, the implementation of the new general education program will be highly effective.
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IELTS essay What are the issues of primary education in Viet Nam?

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
1128 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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