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What are the impacts of remote working on other businesses (coffee shops, hotels etc)?

What are the impacts of remote working on other businesses (coffee shops, hotels etc)? m8dnN

Nowadays, the Internet and the ways of earning money on it are very well developed. Many employers of large firms offer work at home. It's very cool and comfortable for people, as well as safe during a pandemic. However, working from home brings a blow to cafes, hotels and other places where people used to work offline often. We can say that such institutions have started to have a loss in the last 5 years, because there was a pandemic and the Internet began to grow at a tremendous speed and vacancies on it too. Previously, many people did interviews in cafes, went on business trips and stayed overnight in hotels, and now more and more people are choosing remote work. I believe that in this case, institutions also need to reach a higher level, (не очень поняла смысл) because we live in the 21st century and we need to create more innovations.

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