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Advantages of running a business with one’s own family members.

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There are several reasons why running a business with one’s own family members is advantageous. One of them is a strong sense of unity. It is instinctive that all family members demonstrate, share core values to the firm and go along well with each other. That is why they often have a tendency to work hard together to reach the stated goals and make their privately held family firm more successful. Secondly, family-controlled firms are often associated with greater stability in terms of employment, regardless of the economic cycle. The family members share a level of persistent commitment and engagement to the company. A family-run business also is less likely to fire employees during economic downturns. Hence, it can be assumed that family firms generally tend to keep employment levels stable and avoid downsizing. Last but not least, another advantage is decreasing cost and expenditures. Because of their blood relationship, these company members may be more willing to make financial sacrifices for the sake of the business. For instance, they may be enthusiastic about offering their wages to protect their socioemotional wealth. Briefly stated, these advantages can create an extra sense of purpose and a competitive edge for the business.
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more successful.
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associated with greater stability in terms of employment, regardless of the economic cycle. The
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family
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share a level of persistent commitment and engagement to the
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not least, another advantage is decreasing cost and expenditures.
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company
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may be more willing to
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financial sacrifices for the sake of the
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stated, these advantages can create an extra sense of purpose and a competitive edge for the
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IELTS essay Advantages of running a business with one’s own family members.

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