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What are the disadvantages of working too much? What can be done to eliminate the problems?

What are the disadvantages of working too much? What can be done to eliminate the problems? 5Ao3m
Businessmen and businesswomen, successful individuals, believe with the purpose that working overtime affects the fruitfulness of employees, as well as to the other staff and company results. They disclose a condition with that, functioning extra time grant repercussion on annual and decade productivity. In Europe establishments, and organizations diminished working hours noticeable, likewise, the US had done last year.
Businessmen and businesswomen, successful individuals, believe with the purpose that working overtime affects the fruitfulness of employees,
as well
as to the other staff and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
results. They disclose a condition with that, functioning extra time grant repercussion on annual and decade productivity. In Europe establishments, and organizations diminished working hours noticeable,
likewise
, the US had done last year.
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IELTS essay What are the disadvantages of working too much? What can be done to eliminate the problems?

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