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What are the causes of mass migration in some countries?

What are the causes of mass migration in some countries? 8gDV5

There are some reasons why people leave their homeland. Firstly, the critical factor in immigration is an intense desire for better life quality. Many people who live in third-world or developing countries moved to developed countries to escape poverty by finding better employment opportunities and, therefore, higher revenue and prosperity. In other words, immigrants are seeking a convenient future for themselves and their family members. Another reason that motivates people to cross borders is cultural and religious conflict in their homeland. For instance, women in Islamic countries, like Saudi Arabia, are not equal to men, and there is a lot of restriction. Thus the only way to get rid of this hardship is migration. Furthermore, many people abandon their own country to seek security and safety. People who live in countries involved in civil war, such as Afghanistan, wanted to escape from war, violence, and danger.

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