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Argument on how people are judged

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It is quite impossible for one to side perfectly at the end of one range, if one was to give opinions on a topic discussing whether a person’s worth is mostly judged according to social status and material possessions rather than old-fashioned values. In summary, the question is not a matter of black and white, the query above is a grey area. The statement above is agreeable, if the context is a person living in the urban area. It is to be endorsed that a person living in the cities are appraised mostly by their earthly possessions but a person who is living in a Suburgatory will obviously be judged mostly by their ownership of old values such as honor, kindness, and trust. So, to generate an answer on this inquiry, different conditions need to be assessed specifically the geographical factor. Having been witnessing the way people do their activities in both parts of the world helped one segregate the gap between the two communities. For example, people in the cities are majorly materialistic and individualistic, some can even disregard the names of their neighbors, even some can create a whole new group based on one’s wealth. The underlying reason for this is because urbans coteries are closely bounded to their work life. Provided the facts above, the way the people live in the Suburgatory area is very communal, it is significantly different compared to how they do stuffs in the cities. The incumbents tend to recognize each other very well, setup and gather at a townhall, last but not least, to cook and dine together. These communal activities have been driving how the community judge others which is by appraising someone based on the humanitarian principles.
It is quite impossible for one to side
perfectly
at the
end
of one range, if one was to give opinions on a topic discussing whether a
person’s
worth is
mostly
judged according to social status and material possessions
rather
than
old
-fashioned values.

In summary, the question is not a matter of black and white, the query above is a
grey
area. The statement above is agreeable, if the context is a
person
living in the urban area. It is to
be endorsed
that a
person
living in the cities
are appraised
mostly
by their
earthly
possessions
but
a
person
who is living in a
Suburgatory
will
obviously
be judged
mostly
by their ownership of
old
values such as honor, kindness, and trust.
So
, to generate an answer on this inquiry,
different
conditions need to
be assessed
specifically
the geographical factor.

Having been witnessing the way
people
do their activities in both parts of the world
helped
one segregate the gap between the two communities.
For example
,
people
in the cities are
majorly
materialistic and individualistic,
some
can even disregard the names of their neighbors, even
some
can create a whole new group based on one’s wealth. The underlying reason for this is
because
urbans
coteries are
closely
bounded to their work life.

Provided the facts above, the way the
people
live
in the
Suburgatory
area is
very
communal, it is
significantly
different
compared to how they do stuffs in the cities. The incumbents tend to recognize each other
very
well, setup and gather at a
townhall
, last
but
not least, to cook and dine together. These communal activities have been driving how the community judge others which is by appraising someone based on the humanitarian principles.
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IELTS essay Argument on how people are judged

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6.0
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