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As the problem of traffic congestion is becoming severe, many consider car-pooling the best option. In your opinion, how effective it would be? Why

As the problem of traffic congestion is becoming severe, many consider car-pooling the best option. In your opinion, how effective it would be? Why 5bDgN

Private vehicles are increasing day -by -day in our world. The problem of traffic congestion is becoming crucial, In my opinion carpooling is a major solution to reduce traffic and pollution caused by vehicles. Many of the roads are congested with private vehicles nowadays, the harmful gas like carbon monoxide is increasing in our environment. As the number of vehicles decreases pollution rate can be controlled to a greater extent. Harmful gases ejected by trucks, cars, and other huge vehicles can cause a severe impact on nature. Human diseases caused by gases can be reduced. As the more number people going in a single vehicles is better than taking a individual vehicle. For example, lung cancer and other breathing difficulties are increasing nowadays, carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide ejected from each vehicles are the reason for the distraction. On the other side, Nowadays government are charging high income for fuels, taking a single vehicle instead of seperate vehicle helps to save income. Traveling with more people can reduce stress and no need to pay for seperate drivers, make use of public transport maximum instead of private vehicles. Traveling with family members or friends creates more happiness by sharing and discussing problems and helps to build relationships. Road congestion can increase accidents and even emergency traveling also be distracted. For example, emergency vehicles such as ambulance and police vehicles move in high speed they require enough space for traveling, road traffic can results in serious issues. To conclude, carpooling is very advantageous for nature and humans, it can reduce the environmental pollution and money can be saved.

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reduce
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 the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicles
 decreases pollution rate can be controlled
 to a greater extent. Harmful gases ejected by trucks, cars, and other huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicles
 can cause a severe impact on nature. Human diseases caused by gases can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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more number
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people
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vehicles
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vehicle
. For example
, lung cancer and other breathing difficulties are increasing nowadays, carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide ejected from each The noun should be probably in the singular form: "vehicle"?vehicle
vehicles
 are the reason for the distraction.

On the other side, Nowadays This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 are charging high income for fuels, taking a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicle
instead
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seperate
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vehicle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to save income. Traveling with more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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stress
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seperate
 drivers, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of public transport maximum instead
 of private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicles
. Traveling with family members or friends creates more happiness by sharing and discussing problems and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to build relationships. Road congestion can increase accidents and even emergency traveling also
be distracted
. For example
, emergency You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicles
 such as ambulance and police You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicles
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 in high speed they require This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 space for traveling, road traffic can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "result"result
results
 in serious issues.

To conclude
, carpooling is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 advantageous for nature and humans, it can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the environmental pollution and money can be saved
. 