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what are the causes and effects of global warming? what is your salutation?

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One of the serious problem which has been grown is global warming. In many societies these days, people are concerned about that. As a matter of fact, there are various factors which influences the global warming such as greenhouse gas, increasing the population and fossil fuel. It is acknowledged that it has many effects which can be harmful to earth and lives. To begin with the causes, perhaps one of the most important causes is increasing the greenhouse gas. It is also including water vapor, carbon dioxide, methane and other gases. Water vapor has a significant role for this issue. Since the most of the earth landmarks are water, when they vaporize they led to warming the global. In these days its known for having major role to the mentioned issue. In addition, carbon dioxide grows up due the increasing population of human and animals. Meanwhile, they damage the environment and plants which has the obvious effect to reducing carbon dioxide gas. Moreover, fossil fuels such as coal, petrol and gas are used in everywhere is another determining factor to global warming. Reportedly, 75 percent of the energy of world supply by fossil fuels. Thus, more attention should be focused aforementioned situation. The most obvious effect of global warming is Occurrence of drought, floods, hot winds, increasing insects, increasing the amount of water which will be reduce the drinking water and lead to many diseases. Plus, Other consequences are rising sea levels, resulting in coastal areas and underwater islands. To come to conclusion, as regards with the whole views mentioned above, global warming has many causes and effects. In order to fight against it, governments and World Environment Organization should be focused and have more attention on that and one strategy to deal with this issue is replacing sun and wind energy with fossil fuels.
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people
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global
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warming
such as greenhouse
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,
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increasing
the population and
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fossil
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fuel
. It
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effects which can be harmful to earth and
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the greenhouse
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gas
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also
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vapor, carbon dioxide, methane and other gases.
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vapor has a significant role for this issue. Since the most of the earth landmarks are
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water
, when they vaporize they led to
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warming
the
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global
. In these days its known for having major role to the mentioned issue.
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, carbon dioxide grows up due the
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increasing
population of human and animals. Meanwhile, they damage the environment and plants which has the obvious
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effect
to reducing carbon dioxide
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gas
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used
in everywhere is another determining factor to
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. Reportedly, 75 percent of the energy of world supply by
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fossil
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fuels
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Thus
, more attention should
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aforementioned situation.

The most obvious
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is Occurrence of drought, floods, hot winds,
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insects,
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which will be
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and lead to
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diseases. Plus, Other consequences are rising sea levels, resulting in coastal areas and underwater islands.

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to conclusion, as regards with the whole views mentioned above,
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global
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has
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many
causes and effects. In order to fight against it,
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governments
and World Environment Organization should
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and have more attention on that and one strategy to deal with this issue is replacing sun and wind energy with
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fossil
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fuels
.
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IELTS essay what are the causes and effects of global warming? what is your salutation?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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