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Now the most important task is enviroment protection of our planet for future generations.

Now the most important task is enviroment protection of our planet for future generations. El9jR

It is argued that the essential tasks is enviromental protection of our earth untill for future tenaggers. There are several reasons why i would agree having this issue. These days the pollution are divided in my country. First stage is polluted in air planet by humans. For instance, in my rural city which industries are developing by the day. Some industry impact our planet which it has poisonous substance. Such as fuels, paint boxes, in different kind of things. The second stage the climate is so changed day by day. As seaons are not going on in the same way. Some of seosons comes fast in my city which there are a few days to begin. Their occurs from the level of pollution of the climate. On the other hand, unless we attempt to clean our planet, we can not achieve well result. Firstly, we need to limit parking to ride per week. The toxins emitted from them affect the atmosphere. Secondly, we need to reduce the number of manufacting factories. If we teach this to young people, we will at leats protect nature. Our planet become garbage box of excessive plastic wastes, especially on rivers, on oceans which may lead to detrimented effect to surrowdings. For example, heritage protection agency has well developed organizations to endangered nature for the well being. To conclude, save the nature would be a inevitable task for individual. The is not only for the future genes but also the wellness of earth stability.

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enviromental
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untill
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. There are several reasons why Did you mean "I"?I
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agree
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planet
 by humans. For instance
, in my rural city which industries are developing by the day. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 industry impact our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworldasteroid
planet
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different
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so
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changed
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seaons
 are not going on in the same way
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
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seosons
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comes
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fast
 in my city which there are a few days to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
. Their occurs from the level of pollution of the climate. On the other hand
, unless we attempt to clean our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworldasteroid
planet
, we can not achieve well result. Firstly
, we need to limit parking to ride per week. The toxins emitted from them affect the atmosphere. Secondly
, we need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the number of Possible spelling mistake found.manufacturing
manufacting
 factories. If we teach this to young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, we will at Possible spelling mistake found.leastleadsseatsbeatseatslets
leats
 protect nature. Our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworldasteroid
planet
 become garbage box of excessive plastic wastes, especially
 on rivers, on oceans which may lead to Possible spelling mistake found.
detrimented
 effect to Possible spelling mistake found.surroundings
surrowdings
. For example
, heritage protection agency has This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-developed
well developed
 organizations to endangered nature for the This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-being
well being
.

To conclude
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a
 inevitable task for individual. The is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for the future genes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 the wellness of earth stability. 