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What are the benefits of using computers or mobile phones for leisure activities?

What are the benefits of using computers or mobile phones for leisure activities? BM0l9

Technology is one of the greatest inventions of all time. It is currently extensively used across the globe. Smartphones and laptops are additional instances of technology that give us several advantages. First and foremost, they enable us to work more efficiently and effectively, as well as time-saving. It also aids in the enhancement and updating of news and information. Second, we may use the internet to interact with individuals all over the globe and create new relationships via social networks. Third, because there are so many wonderful computer-based occupations available, such as IT, Science Technology, and so on, we may be able to work from home. Finally, entertainment is a significant part of our lives, and computers, as well as cellphones can meet our demands. To summarise, computers and phones are quite beneficial. However, despite offering some benefits, we must utilize them with caution since there are several hazards in the rear.

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