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Some people say that museums should show local culture but some says museums should show foreign culture. Discuss both view and gove your opinion

Some people say that museums should show local culture but some says museums should show foreign culture. Discuss both view and gove your opinion RyryG
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IELTS essay Some people say that museums should show local culture but some says museums should show foreign culture. Discuss both view and gove your opinion

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
203 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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