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What are the benefits of eco-tourism?

What are the benefits of eco-tourism? 7p0A2
Nowadays, Eco-tourism is one of the most famous entertainment industry in the world. It brings about lots of benefits to people who discovered. First of all, ecotourism helps raise individual awareness about conservation and the environment. By understanding the dangers, they may feel more compelled to protect ecosystem. They also learn about local communities and cultures in a way they never from the balcony of their luxury house. They can expand their horizons by learning about local plants and animals, coming closer to nature, uncovering off-the-beaten-path places, and becoing healthier. Another benefit of eco-tourism is job oppoturnities. When ecotourism is expanded, many people who lived in tourist areas will have employment. It will provide jobs and help pull people out of poverty. Overall, there are numerous benefits people can gain when go eco-tourism.
Nowadays, Eco-tourism is one of the most
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helps
raise individual awareness about conservation and the environment. By understanding the
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dangers
, they may feel more compelled to protect ecosystem. They
also
learn about local communities and cultures in a way they never from the balcony of their luxury
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. They can expand their horizons by learning about local plants and animals, coming closer to nature, uncovering off-the-beaten-path places, and
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becoing
healthier. Another benefit of
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eco-tourism
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oppoturnities
. When ecotourism
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who
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in tourist areas will have employment. It will provide jobs and
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IELTS essay What are the benefits of eco-tourism?

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