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write about the English course and obstacle

write about the English course and obstacle 9YBQW

ho how are things going? I hope you are doing good and what about my sister in law? I always pray and I always hope both are doing great. well, I wrote this letter about the which type of obstacle are come from during the IELTS learning process. I thought my experience or logos are nift for your study. I am glad because I share my wisdom or experience with you. I was never ever expected that day was coming in my life, so I am very excited to share my experience with you, first of all brother, for the your perspective was make strong and you decide if any obstacle come in your front then you will be broke down this problem. English is crucial and mandatory thing for us. Today my brother, I am exhausted and excruciating my head and also I was feeble feeling because I never cautious for food or as well as health, first of all I suggest you always cautious your health activities and also this is precise things. I gradually think one quotation here it is "health is wealth" if you are earn money, so if you spend money for your health purpose that is not your income if you saving the money that is your income. you start this course first you will be read/ read/ read, you continuously read become it you only one part you can understand idioms as well as you have also memories vocabulary. Then you memories word then you make perfect idioms. Then i suggest for you must listen of watching TV, radio, movie, drama, TV show and focased speaking and writing then use perfect for your English language ever expected that day was coming in my life, so I am very excited

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHo
ho
 how are things going? I hope you are doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and what about my This word is normally spelled with hyphen.sister-in-law
sister in law
? I always pray and I always hope both are doing great. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWell
well
, I wrote this letter about the which type of obstacle are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from during the IELTS learning process. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 my experience or logos are Possible spelling mistake found.nightgiftliftnightsriftnigh
nift
 for your study.

I am glad This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I share my wisdom or experience with you. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was never ever This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 that day was coming in my life, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited to share my experience with you, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
 brother, for A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "your perspective" or "the perspective"?your perspectivethe perspective
the your perspective
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 strong and you decide if any obstacle The words "come in" and "come to" have different meanings. "Come in your office" means "have an orgasm in your office." "Come to" or "Come into" means "enter." Did you mean "come to" or "come into"?come tocome into
come in
 your front then you will be broke down this problem. English is crucial and mandatory thing for us. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 my brother, I am exhausted
 and excruciating my head and also
 I was feeble feeling This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I never cautious for food or as well
 as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenergystrengthwell-beingfitness
health
, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
 I suggest you always cautious your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenergystrengthwell-beingfitness
health
 activities and also
 this is precise things. I gradually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 one quotation here it is Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
health is wealthUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
 if you are Consider using a past participle here: "earned".earned
earn
 money, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 if you spend money for your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenergystrengthwell-beingfitness
health
 purpose that is
 not your income if Did you mean "you're saving", "you are saving", or "you were saving"?you're savingyou are savingyou were saving
you saving
 the money that is
 your income. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYou
you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 this course first
 you will be read
/ read/ read, you continuously
 read become it you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one part you can understand idioms as well
 as you have also
 memories vocabulary. Then you memories word then you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 perfect idioms. Then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 suggest for you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 listen of watching TV, radio, movie, drama, TV This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 and Possible spelling mistake found.focused
focased
 speaking and writing then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 perfect for your English Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphlanguage.language!language?language:language,language;
language


ever This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 that day was coming in my life, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited