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• What are the benefits and disadvantages of buying a car?

• What are the benefits and disadvantages of buying a car? bxk96
Well, there are many benefits and advantages of buying a car. One of the greatest advantages of buying a new car is the ability to experience all of the latest safety and entertainment technologies the auto industry has to offer. New cars also come with a warranty and not all used vehicles do. Most new vehicles will have very minimal repairs in the first few years, so that gives the consumer a chance to focus only on the basic service maintenance of the car. But, the price of a new car is typically much more expensive than if you bought the vehicle used. New vehicles are said to lose up to 20 percent of their value as soon as you drive off the lot.
Well, there are
many
benefits and advantages of buying a
car
. One of the greatest advantages of buying a
new
car
is the ability to experience
all of the
latest safety and entertainment technologies the auto industry
has to
offer.
New
cars
also
come
with a warranty and not all
used
vehicles
do. Most
new
vehicles
will have
very
minimal repairs in the
first
few years,
so
that gives the consumer a chance to focus
only
on the basic service maintenance of the
car
.
But
, the price of a
new
car
is
typically
much more expensive than if you
bought
the
vehicle
used
.
New
vehicles
are said
to lose up to 20 percent of their value as
soon
as you drive off the lot.
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IELTS essay • What are the benefits and disadvantages of buying a car?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
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