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What are the benefit of reading? include any specific examples in your answer? ENkdq
Reading helps us extend the knowledge and information we have. There are a lot of advantages of out into books. Two main reasons of reading book are important to remember. First of all, looking through book and articles improve the way human minds work. For example, flipping through newspaper will give an idea of what is happening around the world. Secondly, reading a specific researches in one subject will make you an advanced. For instance, searching about English language helps with the way you express yourself in this language and will open a lot of opportunities. To sum up, the usefulness of reading not will only give you variety information but it will also make things easier to understand by the time passing. On one side some thinks the parents are the main charectare in their children life and should take the resposibelity for one reasons. Firstly, it was the parents decision to bring these kids so they should be ready to teach them about being good to people. For example, a father role is the show his boy how to be nice to women and not bothering them. In the other hand, people thinks kids spend more time in school and would be better to take an advise from a teacher or principle such as teaching them how to say Thank you or You are welcome to other kid as they are in a small socity. Finally children are easy to learn anything but they only need the time and attinchen and I think that only can be done by their own families.
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helps
us extend the knowledge and information we have. There are
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a lot of
advantages of out into books. Two main reasons of
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reading
book are
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important
to remember.
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First of all
, looking through book and articles
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improve
the way human minds work.
For example
, flipping through newspaper will give an
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idea
of what is happening around the world.
Secondly
,
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reading
a specific researches in one subject will
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make
you
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an advanced
.
For instance
, searching about English language
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helps
with the way you express yourself in this language and will open
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a lot of
opportunities. To sum up, the usefulness of
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reading
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only
give you variety information
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also
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make
things easier to understand by the time passing.

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the parents are the main
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for one reasons.
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they should be ready to teach them about being
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, a father role is the
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show
his boy how to be nice to women and not bothering them. In the other hand,
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people
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thinks
kids spend more time in school and would be better to take an
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advise
from a teacher or principle such as teaching them how to say Thank you or You are welcome to other kid as they are in a
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small
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children are easy to learn anything
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need the time and
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IELTS essay What are the benefit of reading? include any specific examples in your answer?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
264 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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