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What are the advantages of online learning?

What are the advantages of online learning? kjj6M
In this Covid 19 period, learning online is now the only thing that every country have to do to continue their education for all the students. I really like learning online because there are some advantages that I will never experience when I learn offline. The first is the force of the time, I can get up later than the time I have to do when learn offline. The second will be the time having breakfast, I can eat while study instead of finish the meal before class. The last will be the time doing the homework and the task, it may be much more comfortable
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IELTS essay What are the advantages of online learning?

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