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Animal extinction people use them as leather. Some say animals should be protected which are usefull to humans.

Animal extinction people use them as leather. Some say animals should be protected which are usefull to humans. 0BB69
Noundays getting entery species of animals day by day · People are wing them for making leather. . Clothy etc. Some Some which people -say that animale should be protected. useful to human, but, I disagree with the Statement. The geasons bekind disagaceing with this statement because as per those them the need and wants than species will also get extinct after few years. Many of the species are nowaday wing because of killing getting crtinct and hones for personal lux. This animal should be not protected and to be kill for industrial or perional. USE. Some of the animali are required for day to day use no replacem sent is found. But increasing in technology, may find some other way, as if these animal got extinct then the future won't be able to know those animals. We Con replace few leather with artificial leather so that it become easy love Suth animale
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getting
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entery
species of
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animals
day by day ·
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People
are wing them for making leather.
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.
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Clothy
etc.
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Some
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which
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people
-say that
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animale
should
be protected
.
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useful
to human,
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but
, I disagree with
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the


Statement.

The
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geasons
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bekind
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disagaceing
with this statement
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because
as per those them the need and wants than species will
also
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get
extinct after few years.
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Many
of the species are
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nowaday
wing
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because
of killing getting
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crtinct
and hones for personal lux. This
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animal
should be not protected and to be
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kill
for industrial or
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perional
.
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USE
.

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Some of the
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animali
are required
for day to day
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use
no
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replacem
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sent
is found
.
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But
increasing in technology, may find
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some
other way, as if these
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animal
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got
extinct then the future won't be able to know those
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animals
. We Con replace few leather with artificial leather
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so
that it become easy
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love
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Suth
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animale

IELTS essay Animal extinction people use them as leather. Some say animals should be protected which are usefull to humans.

Essay
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4 paragraphs
152 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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