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What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform ?

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Today, most companies demand wearing uniform from their employees. Most workers do not like this demand. But there are some advantages and disadvantages of this. In this essay we talk about that. Let's start to look through pros sides of this. Firstly, wearing uniform closes the difference between people who are not equal economically, espicially between women. In addition, uniforms that are free from fashion items help workers to focus on their project. It is the best reason why office workers are demanded to wear uniform. Turning to the other side of argument, Uniform is discomfortable for work. It is a bit hard to feel free. Also, one of the main cons of wearing uniforms is that it takes a lot of time changing into and out of your uniforms Overall, it is nice to wear uniforms, if you like it. Also it gives you great official look. And it always proves itself why it is necessary.
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companies
demand wearing
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advantages and disadvantages of this. In this essay we talk about that.

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to look through pros sides of this.
Firstly
, wearing
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closes the difference between
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people
who are not equal
economically
,
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espicially
between women.
In addition
,
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uniforms
that are free from fashion items
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help
workers to focus on their project. It is the best reason why office workers
are demanded
to wear uniform.

Turning to the other side of argument,
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Uniform
is
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discomfortable
for work. It is a bit
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hard
to feel free.
Also
, one of the main cons of wearing
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uniforms
is that it takes
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a lot of
time changing into and out of your uniforms

Overall
, it is nice to wear
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uniforms
, if you like it.
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Also
it gives you great official look. And it always proves itself why it is necessary.

IELTS essay What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
157 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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