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An increasing number of professional such as doctors and teachers

An increasing number of professional such as doctors and teachers BMdyp
More and more professionals are choosing to have their job in advanced countries than in their native nations. As a result, skillful individuals in the poorer regions may reduce and also the standards which they acquired may not be sufficient in abroad. So, this can be resolved by providing better living and education standards. The main problem faced by the underdeveloped countries in the fields such as medicine and teaching is that the ace people in the province may reduce. In other words, after completing their graduation, the doctors and other professionals may not be sufficient for the remaining citizens to teach and treat. Another major problem faced by the international students was the knowledge regarding the majoring subject. If youngsters or any job holders want to study in global universities, they may not get enrolled in the particular university because of the high-level competition. For example, Canadian Universities have a minimum of 75% for the master's program, where most of the Indians cannot achieve such percentage in their under graduation. One effective solution to deal with professionals migrating to another country is their government should come up with incentives. They should increase the wages so that they can earn high and satisfy their needs. For instance, colleges should rise professor's income to at least 80%, so that they can do justice for their job. Another way to curb this is to strengthen the quality of education. The study curriculum should set in a way that is more analytical and creative than in a grade system. By implementing this strategy, students can gain more knowledge and be competitive. A survey done by Queens University, in 2018, showed that 50% of the students were studying to pass their exams instead of developing the concept. In conclusion, to tackle problems such as professional reduction and insufficient education, the levels should be increased by improving their salaries and changing the education system so that people may not immigrate to global countries.
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professionals
are choosing to have their job in advanced
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countries
than in their native nations.
As a result
, skillful individuals in the poorer regions may
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reduce
and
also
the standards which they acquired may not be sufficient in abroad.
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So
, this can
be resolved
by providing better living and
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education
standards.

The main problem faced by the underdeveloped
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countries
in the fields such as medicine and teaching is that the ace
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in the province may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
.
In other words
, after completing their graduation, the doctors and other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
professionals
may not be sufficient for the remaining citizens to teach and treat. Another major problem faced by the international students was the knowledge regarding the majoring subject. If youngsters or any job holders want to study in global
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universities
, they may not
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get
enrolled in the particular
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university
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because
of the high-level competition.
For example
, Canadian
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Universities
have a minimum of 75% for the master's program, where most of the Indians cannot achieve such percentage in their under graduation.

One effective solution to deal with
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professionals
migrating to another
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country
is their
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government
should
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come
up with incentives. They should increase the wages
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they can earn high and satisfy their needs.
For instance
, colleges should rise professor's income to at least 80%,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they can do justice for their job. Another way to curb this is to strengthen the quality of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
. The study curriculum should set in a way
that is
more analytical and creative than in a grade system. By implementing this strategy, students can gain more knowledge and be competitive. A survey done by Queens
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
University
, in 2018,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
that 50% of the students were studying to pass their exams
instead
of developing the concept.

In conclusion
, to tackle problems such as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
professional
reduction and insufficient
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
, the levels should
be increased
by improving their salaries and changing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
system
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
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people
may not immigrate to global
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countries
.
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IELTS essay An increasing number of professional such as doctors and teachers

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
328 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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