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What are the advantages and disadvantages of travelling by bicycle?

What are the advantages and disadvantages of travelling by bicycle? MMrGa
In the contemporary world more and more people are employing bicycles as a means of transportation in travelling. However, this phenomenon possesses not only pros, but also cons which will be discussed further. One of the main positives of using bike in travelling is time. Everyone can determine their own timetable and no need in getting out of the bed to catch the 5 or 6 a. m. train or bus, instead, they can get up when they want, leave when they are ready, and of course, stop to rest when they are tired. Another benefit of using bicycle is exploring every inch of the world. It allows to discover the lay of the land kilometre by kilometre. It is better than sitting sedentary for epic 8 or 10 hours bus journeys and not to mention, we can miss the awesome view while taking a nap. Turning to the other side of the argument, extensive planning is required. It is not as easy as taking some clothes and other necessary gears, if it is long term bicycle tour, covering the basis of what you need for you as well as your wheels can be an arduous task. Another issue is that like all machines, bicycles can break down and wear out. If you are in that kind of situation you have to know how to fix, in other words, before travelling by bicycle we should have fair understanding of bikes. In conclusion, some appealing side of travelling by bicycle could arouse the sense of taking a risk and makes us head off into the journey. Nevertheless, it is not appropriate for everyone, especially, for those who is faint-hearted. There also are some experiences that nothing compares to the satisfaction of knowing that your travel experiences are powered by your own body.
In the contemporary world more and more
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people
are employing
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bicycles
as a means of transportation in
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travelling
.
However
, this phenomenon possesses not
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only
pros,
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but
also
cons which will
be discussed
further
.

One of the main positives of using bike in
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travelling
is time. Everyone can determine their
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own
timetable and no need in getting out of the bed to catch the 5 or 6 a. m. train or bus,
instead
, they can
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get
up when they want,
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leave
when they are ready, and
of course
,
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stop
to rest when they
are tired
.

Another benefit of using
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bicycle
is exploring every inch of the world. It
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allows
to discover the lay of the land
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kilometre
by
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kilometre
. It is better than sitting sedentary for epic 8 or 10 hours bus journeys and not to mention, we can miss the awesome view while taking a nap.

Turning to the other side of the argument, extensive planning
is required
. It is not as easy as taking
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some
clothes and other necessary gears, if it is long
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term
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bicycle
tour, covering the basis of what you need for you
as well
as your wheels can be an arduous task.

Another issue is that like all machines,
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bicycles
can break down and wear out. If you are in that kind of situation you
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have to
know how to
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fix
,
in other words
,
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before
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travelling
by
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bicycle
we should have
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fair
understanding of bikes.

In conclusion
,
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some
appealing side of
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travelling
by
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bicycle
could arouse the sense of taking a
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risk
and
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makes
us head off into the journey.
Nevertheless
, it is not appropriate for everyone,
especially
, for those who is faint-hearted. There
also
are
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some
experiences that nothing compares to the satisfaction of knowing that your travel experiences
are powered
by your
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own
body.
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IELTS essay What are the advantages and disadvantages of travelling by bicycle?

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6 paragraphs
301 words
6.0
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