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Government nowadays think about space science and technology in our country spend funds for other new research so that other thing it's worng and some people think that it's right. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statements

Government nowadays think about space science and technology in our country spend funds for other new research so that other thing it's worng and some people think that it's right. with the statements 6xanG
Presently our nation is greatly working In technology field that because of great name or fame in the global market. However, other people think that It is good for our country and other opinion is does well in space science technology. In this essay I will discuss further in a positive way and some example shows in related this technology. On a One hand that, Space science is greatly difficult and expansive not only in our position, but also internationally, that because of some people think that it is not good, but I 98aprisiate for our scientist they are nicely work and great opportunity to work in this field for Example, recently launched magalyan and chandrayan gratly got successfully with little cost compare to other country, while got this opportunity femous our country in space science that result science and technology are good for spend money from our tax, that is one positive point. On the other hand, technology system in India greatly go ahead with a new other advanced system make everybody knew about first small satellite occupide from our country and he was only 18 year old student study in school level, it is one of the best example for our nation and his boys also invited by NASA space centre it is appreciated for our nation so that in science and technology spend money is not worth they think is not appropriate. In conclusion, Science and Modern technology are good way go great level spend money from the government it is good think recently our species Center are best in the market and also some small and big societies are working new research with advanced material with a less cost estimate due to government ought to spend funds for this type of technology in good worth.
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our nation is
greatly
working In
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technology
field that
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because
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,
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people
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think
that It is
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good
for our
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country
and
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other
opinion is does well in
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space
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science
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technology
. In this essay I will discuss
further
in a
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positive
way and
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some
example
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shows
in related this technology.

On a One hand that,
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Space
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science
is
greatly
difficult and expansive not
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only
in our position,
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but
also
internationally
, that
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because
of
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some
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people
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think
that it is not
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good
,
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but
I 98aprisiate for our scientist they are
nicely
work and great opportunity to work in this field
for Example
, recently launched
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magalyan
and
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chandrayan
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gratly
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got
successfully
with
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little
cost compare to
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other
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country
, while
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got
this opportunity
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femous
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in
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science
that result
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science
and
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technology
are
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good
for
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spend
money from our tax,
that is
one
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positive
point.

On the
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other
hand,
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technology
system in India
greatly
go ahead with a new
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other
advanced system
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make
everybody knew about
first
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small
satellite
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occupide
from our
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country and
he was
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18 year
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student study in school level, it is one of the best example for our nation and his boys
also
invited by NASA
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centre
it
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for our nation
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and
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technology
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spend
money is not worth they
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think
is not appropriate.

In conclusion
,
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Science
and Modern
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technology
are
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good
way go great level
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spend
money from the
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government
it is
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good
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think
recently our species Center are best in the market and
also
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some
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small
and
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big
societies are working new research with advanced material with a less cost estimate due to
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government
ought to
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spend
funds for this type of
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technology
in
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good
worth.
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IELTS essay Government nowadays think about space science and technology in our country spend funds for other new research so that other thing it's worng and some people think that it's right. with the statements

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
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