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what are the advantages and disadvantages of studying online courses? v.1

what are the advantages and disadvantages of studying online courses? v. 1
These days, online courses have been an ubiquitous part of learning due to the outbreak of Covid19. Having a long quarantine without studying is a waste of time! For that reason, we are now doing on- screen course to finish our tutorial. From my perspective, I think it is a great method of gaining knowledge, but this type of learning still meet some handicaps. First and foremost, online studying allows us to plan our personal schedule, duration of training and the subject we want. Unlike the old teaching method, students are bound by time and deadlines. For instance, Vietnamese learners must go to school early and study until evening. Provided that they have less time for outdoor activities. What is more, students are able to study in accordance with a personal pace and educational needs. This is what that normal learning can not do. Online courses provide us to choose our studious and pleasant environment in common. Despite those benefits, many of us cannot control, our self- discipline. In other words, we do not fully concentrate on the lesson. We tend to be distracted by those entertaining things, very soon discard the lecture. Futhermore, plagiarism is the worst. Learners are likely to search for the answers rather than to brainstorm. Recently, both students and teachers have had some apprehensions for hackers in the light of being unable to access to the courses. Many solutions have been proposed, still, this issue has not been disentangled. In a nutshell, joining an online course is a perfect choice during this terrible pandemic. However, it is benificial or detrimental depends much on how you obtain the knowledge and your attitude toward it
These days,
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courses
have been
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ubiquitous part of learning due to the outbreak of
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Covid19
. Having a long quarantine without studying is a waste of time! For that reason, we are
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now
doing on- screen
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course
to finish our tutorial. From my perspective, I
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think
it is a great method of gaining knowledge,
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but
this type of learning
still
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meet
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some
handicaps.

First
and foremost,
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studying
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allows
us to plan our personal schedule, duration of training and the subject we want. Unlike the
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old
teaching method, students
are bound
by time and deadlines.
For instance
, Vietnamese learners
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
go to school early and study until evening. Provided that they have less time for outdoor activities.
What is more
, students are able to study in accordance with a personal pace and educational needs. This is what that normal learning can not do.
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Online
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courses
provide us to choose our studious and pleasant environment in common.

Despite those benefits,
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many
of us cannot control, our self- discipline.
In other words
, we do not
fully
concentrate on the lesson. We tend to
be distracted
by those entertaining things,
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very
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soon
discard the lecture.
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Futhermore
, plagiarism is the worst. Learners are likely to search for the answers
rather
than to brainstorm. Recently, both students and teachers have had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
apprehensions for hackers in the light of being unable to access to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
solutions have
been proposed
,
still
, this issue has not
been disentangled
.

In a nutshell, joining an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
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course
is a perfect choice during this terrible pandemic.
However
, it is
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benificial
or detrimental depends much on how you obtain the knowledge and your attitude toward it
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay what are the advantages and disadvantages of studying online courses? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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