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The number of people who like eating junk food on a regular basis has increased dramatically. While many eaters suppose that this trend will eventually lead to various health problems and need to be prohibited completely. My opinion is that it is unnecessary to do and will discuss the reasons why in this essay. It’s true that eating fast food is the cause of chronic illnesses such as obesity, diabetes and heart disease; however, the dwellers' consumption for this type of food has increased dramatically in recent years. As a result, banning these eatables is not a reasonable solution. In order to solve this issue, residents need to raise awareness about the negative effects of food items. Additionally, Governments should invest funds in educational advertisements which encourage consumers to prefer organic food to junk food. A second major reason for the rapid rise in the use of these harmful products is that they are always available and low-cost, hence, allowing students and officers to save time and money. Consequently, the chains of fast food stores get huge profits. I am convinced that local authorities should impose higher tax or limit numerous operating restaurant chains, which would result in an decrease in housing customers. To sum up, I believe that fast food should not be banned. Although abstaining from them can maintain a vigorous body and lower the risk of becoming ill, imposing an all-time halt to these products have a negative impact on the economy; therefore, having the public about the consequences and promoting them to eat less junk food.

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many
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fast
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food
 is the cause of chronic illnesses such as obesity, diabetes and heart disease; however
, the dwellers' consumption for this type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 has increased dramatically
 in recent years. As a result
, banning these eatables is not a reasonable solution. In order to solve this issue, residents need to raise awareness about the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
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Governments
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 to junk food.

A second major reason for the rapid rise in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of these harmful products is that they are always available and low-cost, hence
, allowing students and officers to save time and money. Consequently
, the chains of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
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food
 stores This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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 that local authorities should impose higher tax or limit numerous operating restaurant chains, which would result in Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
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To sum up, I believe that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
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food
 should not be banned
. Although abstaining from them can maintain a vigorous body and lower the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 of becoming ill, imposing an all-time halt to these products have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact on the economy; therefore
, having the public about the consequences and promoting them to eat less junk You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
. 