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Cocoon is a Vietnamese vegan cosmetic brand, the name of the brand is influenced by the image of a cocoon, which is a "house" to cherish and nurture a small worm so that one day it will turn into a gorgeous butterfly. For that reason, Cocoon wishes to bring quality beauty care products to consumers, so that they can become more beautiful and confident. What I like about this brand is that they use ingredients that are familiar and available in many regions of Vietnam such as Dak Lak coffee, coconut, grapefruit, . . .
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IELTS essay talk about a famous brand in vietnam

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1 paragraphs
95 words
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