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Describe one of your intern memories

Describe one of your intern memories KVV7M
The first days of the internship course are interesting, I received a lot of many help from my mentors. Especially it's from a man in the engineering department. I call him “uncle Vu“ cause he’s the oldest in the company who helped me with everything work. Although have many difficulties at Work, he always smiles and his humor made people relaxed so that I appreciate his attitude, I’ll finish my internship course this June. I’ll always remember him and I‘m grateful for his help.
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me with everything work. Although have
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difficulties at Work, he always smiles and his humor made
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people
relaxed
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that I appreciate his attitude, I’ll finish my internship course this June. I’ll always remember him and I‘m grateful for his
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IELTS essay Describe one of your intern memories

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  American English
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